The focus for writing this year is instructional writing. On Tuesday Room 6 wrote instructions on how to make a bed. Here are some examples of the children's amazing writing that I found quite entertaining in some places...
How
to make a bed – instructional writing 21/4
YOUR
ENEMY THE BED
Have you got a bed so dirty that it can’t
look in the mirror? Well my friend or foe you need my help! I’ll give you seven
simple pimple steps and your bed will be spick and span in no time. So get your
bottom off the ground and get to work!
Step 1: Old sheets out new sheets in. For starters you need to strip your sheets
and get a new one from the cupboard and lay it out on the mattress.
Step 2: Tuck in the corners. After you’ve laid it out you need to tuck in
the corners extra tight!
Step 3: Puffy Pillows! Now it’s time for
other pillows so get 1 or 2 fresh covers and wrap them around the inside.
Step 4: Make sure it’s even. Once you’ve done that make sure both sides
are even.
Step 5: Duvet cover. Now you have to lay the duvet over the sheet.
Step 6: Styling time! Now I’m getting to that
part you can style your bed up with a variety of toys!
Step 7: Go and get your parents and say
”Isn’t it wonderful?” but your parents will probably say yes but you haven’t
cleaned the rest of the room!
By Kuku
HOW TO TIDY YOUR BED
Have you always had a bed that is sooooo completely
ball smacked your mum doesn’t clean it? Well I can turn your bed into a bed of
a king.
Step 1: You need to wipe every single thing
on your bed then run like an athletic champion to your new sheets.
Step 2: Put your bottom sheet on your
mattress because they’re both little friends. Now make sure you tuck in the
bottom sheet. Very good - otherwise you’re
going to go back to where you started.
Step 3: Get your pillow and your pillowcase
on top or when you go to bed you might roll out of your bed and fall into a
dimension of uncomfortableness.
Step 4: Put on your top sheet that you get
from the evil lair the cupboard and gently place the top sheet on top of
everything else.
Step 5: Now this is the cozy part - put
your magical duvet also on top of everything. Now for this snuggly masterpiece -
make your dreams more magical and tuck it in!
Step 6: Now just incase have some extra
blankets and if something happens, you might want to have cuddly toys in your
bed to play with or have as company.
Step 7: Crawl into your bed, snore and fall
asleeeeep!
By Harvey
Have you got a bed that has a war going on
between messiness and cleanliness? So
listen to this! Step 1: Clear your bed and leave the dirty sheets in the wash.
Step 2: Get some bottom sheets on, tuck it into the corners, sides and under
the mattress. Step 3: Neatly tuck your
pillow into the case and then neatly put your pillow on your bed. Step 4: Neatly tuck on the top sheet and
check if it’s clean. Step 5: Put on the
MASSIVE duvet cover so you can have a soft bed.
Step 6: Put on some extra warm snuggly blankets, some soft toys, and
some comfy cushions. Step 7: You need to
chillax and fall asleep and all of your problems will be solved. And that’s how you make your bed.
By Ethan Baker
STRIP
YOUR BED AND PUT A FRESH DIAPER ON IT
Are you one of those human beings that has
a bed so dirty that your going to move to a hotel any minute? Stop packing your
bags! All you need to do is strip your bed and put a new fresh nappy on it!
Step 1: Firstly take your pillow off your
bed by grabbing your pillow and chuck it on the ground your standing on. But try not to stand on it. Also, strip the sheet, duvet, and blankets
off by pinching them and pulling them and put them in the washing machine –
although after you do that – don’t look at your bed too much – because it’s
naked!
Step 2: Now get a pillowcase and put it on
top of your pillow by shaking it in just like you do when you’re about to drink
a smoothie.
Step 3: Thirdly place your tidy, nice
smelling sheet, blanket and duvet on the bed after they’ve been cleaned and
dried by tucking them in.
Step 4: Congratulate yourself by having a sleep.
By Lily D